Self and buddy Evaluation

Nihdi

How can we take care of our planet earth?

Pollution  is a major problem to the environment because it harms our marine life and other things as well.

For example it pollutes the sea water and our Native sea animals including our coral Reef ,that are dying along with

our ecosystem. This makes it hard to breath or even survive.We throw single use plastic bags away but we don't

realize how much it affects the environment.We can plant more trees. Trees are being cut down to make paper,

furniture, pencil but at the same time we should cut down and plant more trees. We should do everything we can to

make our earth better and healthier if we stop polluting,wasting water,stop doing

things that might affect the environment.

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After looking at my writing sample i looked at my writing rubric to see if i am a stage 4 or 5 then i used the Self Evaluation to rate our level of using Punctuation, Vocab, Sentence Structure, ideas.Joel was my Partner (Buddy) we did this work collaboratively to do this task and helped each other telling what we needed to improve on and what i had done.My partner thinks that i had added detailed information.